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cocktail time by Orwald cocktail time by Orwald
well... it`s my belated birthday present for dear :icondemonmathiel: :party: hope you like it! Kampaaai! Nice hollidays for everyone! :tighthug:
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Copyright by Orwald.
2012

All rights reserved.
NOT TO BE EDITED, COPIED, USED ON ANY OTHER WEBSITE WITHOUT MY WRITTEN PERMISSION, NOT TO BE MANIPULATED. NOT TO BE USED AS STOCK. THANK YOU! :police:



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:iconkessima:
Let me just start by saying what a lovely piece this is. The simple, dreamy atmosphere is greatly appealing.

My grievance, though, is that it's hard for me to know what precisely to focus on. There's a lot going on, all compressed into a relatively small space. If the juice glass and hanging oranges had more negative space between them, I'd have an easier time devoting my attention to specific elements individually, which would allow me to take it all in more easily.

A greater amount of contrast would also allow more attention to go to the glass and oranges, rather than having that attention swallowed up by the background. The table is a distractingly similar color to the subject, and the greenery outside seems to have a yellow-brown tint. If it were lit differently, or if the contrast/colors were adjusted, then more focus would be brought to the subject.

In short: with wider spacing of the subjects and more contrast in the lighting, the piece would be extremely striking.

Over, a beautiful piece of photography! Keep up the excellent work.
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:iconlunatehkitty:
LunaTehKitty Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing, perfectly-timed shot!
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Spectacular!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thnx
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconjoannamoory:
JoannaMoory Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Hi! :wave:
This work has been featured in my journal here: [link] ! :iconyummycakeplz:
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:iconelaines-darkroom:
ELaiNes-DarkRoom Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Nice colours !
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:icongryffgirl:
Gryffgirl Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
The splash and bright colors make me happy! :orange: :iconorangeflowerplz: :iconorangeheartplz:
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:giggle:
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:iconleady92:
leady92 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student General Artist
very nice!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
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:iconfal-name:
fal-name Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Photographer
hi :wave:
your wonderful work has been featured here => [link]
enjoy! :rose:
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:iconpurplekyloe:
purplekyloe Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Hello! I've featured your beautiful deviation here: [link] :D
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:iconocean-polaire:
ocean-polaire Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
it's amazing. well done :clap:
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:iconarchangellupus:
ArchangelLupus Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
Gorgeous photography with vibrant colours. Love it.
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks a lot
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:iconarchangellupus:
ArchangelLupus Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
No worries :)
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:iconeliennay:
Eliennay Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Amazing! *-*
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thns
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:iconeliennay:
Eliennay Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
=D
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:iconelanor90:
Elanor90 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ух как сочно и задорно :D
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
спасибо! экспериментировала! и как назло - в тот день солнца не было! вот и темновато чуть, конечно)
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:iconelaines-darkroom:
ELaiNes-DarkRoom Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Awesome! :clap:
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thnx
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:icondikinsonova:
DikinsonovA Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I think I am very thirsty now :D
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:woohoo:
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:icon101gleek101:
101gleek101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have been featured here; [link]
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:icontoitylover:
toitylover Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
wow its great!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thnx
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:iconfrigidphoenix:
FrigidPhoenix Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student General Artist
What I wanted to say was pretty much covered in Kessima's critique. It's a beautiful piece but is just lacks focus. Keep up the good work though, your a good photographer and practice makes perfect :)
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:iconzanasoul:
ZanaSoul Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Amazing shot and timing dear.
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks a lot, dear! :sun:
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:iconmeimei808:
meimei808 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yay!! ahh loving all your fun orange pieces!!!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:woohoo: oranges rules! :)
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:iconpqphotography:
pqphotography Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:floating: Featured in my journal [link] :floating:
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:iconiulia-oprinesc:
Iulia-Oprinesc Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconhellothereplz: Your wonderful pic is featured in my journal: [link] :iconcocoloveplz:

Hope you don't mind :iconcocoglompplz:
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:iconpshoudini:
PSHoudini Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012   Digital Artist
Congrats, this image has been selected for our weekly poll [link]
in :icon3every30days:

Feel free to contact your friends to join the group and vote as well.

Cheers and have a great week.

Miguel
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:iconfmosharraf:
fmosharraf Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
FUCKing love OJ! :D
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:iconmadsubstance:
MadSubstance Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Feature ~ ! [link] :heart:
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:iconrosecs:
RoseCS Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Great!:clap:
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:iconorangesrkool:
Orangesrkool Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Photographer
I like lots. :)
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:iconhaifona:
Haifona Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
so creative!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
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:iconchococosmos:
Chococosmos Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
incredible!*-*
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow:
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:iconarualcat:
arualcat Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Absolutely amazing!!! Great effect!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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:icongeminitrix:
Geminitrix Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
I can almost taste the freshness! This looks really cool, awesome job! :)
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks a lot
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