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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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My grievance, though, is that it's hard for me to know what precisely to focus on. There's a lot going on, all compressed into a relatively small space. If the juice glass and hanging oranges had more negative space between them, I'd have an easier time devoting my attention to specific elements individually, which would allow me to take it all in more easily.
A greater amount of contrast would also allow more attention to go to the glass and oranges, rather than having that attention swallowed up by the background. The table is a distractingly similar color to the subject, and the greenery outside seems to have a yellow-brown tint. If it were lit differently, or if the contrast/colors were adjusted, then more focus would be brought to the subject.
In short: with wider spacing of the subjects and more contrast in the lighting, the piece would be extremely striking.
Over, a beautiful piece of photography! Keep up the excellent work.
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