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July 20, 2012
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 50D
Shutter Speed
1/1024 second
Aperture
F/1.6
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 19, 2012, 3:26:49 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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cocktail time by Orwald cocktail time by Orwald
well... it`s my belated birthday present for dear :icondemonmathiel: :party: hope you like it! Kampaaai! Nice hollidays for everyone! :tighthug:
:police:
Copyright by Orwald.
2012

All rights reserved.
NOT TO BE EDITED, COPIED, USED ON ANY OTHER WEBSITE WITHOUT MY WRITTEN PERMISSION, NOT TO BE MANIPULATED. NOT TO BE USED AS STOCK. THANK YOU! :police:



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:iconkessima:
Let me just start by saying what a lovely piece this is. The simple, dreamy atmosphere is greatly appealing.

My grievance, though, is that it's hard for me to know what precisely to focus on. There's a lot going on, all compressed into a relatively small space. If the juice glass and hanging oranges had more negative space between them, I'd have an easier time devoting my attention to specific elements individually, which would allow me to take it all in more easily.

A greater amount of contrast would also allow more attention to go to the glass and oranges, rather than having that attention swallowed up by the background. The table is a distractingly similar color to the subject, and the greenery outside seems to have a yellow-brown tint. If it were lit differently, or if the contrast/colors were adjusted, then more focus would be brought to the subject.

In short: with wider spacing of the subjects and more contrast in the lighting, the piece would be extremely striking.

Over, a beautiful piece of photography! Keep up the excellent work.
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:iconlunatehkitty:
LunaTehKitty Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing, perfectly-timed shot!
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Karinta Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Spectacular!
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thnx
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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JoannaMoory Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Hi! :wave:
This work has been featured in my journal here: [link] ! :iconyummycakeplz:
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ELaiNes-DarkRoom Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Nice colours !
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Gryffgirl Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
The splash and bright colors make me happy! :orange: :iconorangeflowerplz: :iconorangeheartplz:
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:iconorwald:
Orwald Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:giggle:
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leady92 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student General Artist
very nice!
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