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Canon
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Canon EOS 50D
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1/2048 second
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F/1.4
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50 mm
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100
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Aug 12, 2012, 5:01:20 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
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2012
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NOT TO BE EDITED, COPIED, USED ON ANY OTHER WEBSITE WITHOUT MY WRITTEN PERMISSION, NOT TO BE MANIPULATED. NOT TO BE USED AS STOCK. THANK YOU! :police:




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I didn't have the time to leave a Critique - but your work was so nice I simply had to stop and to do it.

Let me start with the vision. The red heart is the main focus of the picture: the eyes fall upon it, and the white and grey of the notebook create a stark contrast. The soap bubble with their circolar shape soften up the linear edges of the shot, and with their colours add almost a magic feeling. I put a 5 to the Vision.
I couldn't give to you a full 5 to the Originality, instead, because this is a theme I saw often all around on DA and generally in modern shots. Although, the way your title blends with the theme is interesting and nice. Therefore, I put here a 4,5.
The technique. The way the ground comes in focus around the notebook, while fading just around it, helps the watcher's eyes to fall just upon the right parts. There's a nice balance between colours and greys, the soap bubble adding much needed light to a soft shot. All in all, you were able to take a great composition, to put in the right light and to take a marvellous shot. I couldn't give to you less than a full 5 to the Technique.
About the impact, the only reason why I didn't put a 5 here, too, is the small dimensions of the shot. A bigger photo would have had more impact on the watcher - and I would have liked to study the details in a larger photo. A 4,5 here, too.

All in all, my compliments. You took a lovely composition based upon details; added a gentle touch with the circular shapes of the soap bubbles to the linear notebook and to the fading street; played very nicely with colours an light. Well-balanced and interesting.

Excuse me, please, for my errors; I'm not an English speaker.
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sweir17 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012   Photographer
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ilcieloazurri Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
love!!!
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passion-aesthete Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute
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rudy607 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
exelent!!
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SkyHalo Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This wonderful photograph has been featured here: [link] :heart:

Have a nice day! :love: :hug:
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PoOfyPink Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lOve it :iconiheartitplz: ..
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Orwald Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanki
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PoOfyPink Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're Very Welcome :iconlovehug: ..
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raymondtan85 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
A beautiful shot indeed. LOVE IT :D
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Orwald Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you
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