| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
#europeans
#iPhotograph
#Photographic-Club
#photographersfanclub
#Tiny-Worlds-Photo
#Me-and-My-Camera
#photographyISpoetry
#Canon-Users
| Photography / Still Life / Other | ©2012-2013 *Orwald |
love 10
10
|
joy 1
1
|
wow 2
2
|
mad 0
0
|
sad 0
0
|
fear 0
0
|
neutral 0
0
|
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
|
Sta.sh
Let me start with the vision. The red heart is the main focus of the picture: the eyes fall upon it, and the white and grey of the notebook create a stark contrast. The soap bubble with their circolar shape soften up the linear edges of the shot, and with their colours add almost a magic feeling. I put a 5 to the Vision.
I couldn't give to you a full 5 to the Originality, instead, because this is a theme I saw often all around on DA and generally in modern shots. Although, the way your title blends with the theme is interesting and nice. Therefore, I put here a 4,5.
The technique. The way the ground comes in focus around the notebook, while fading just around it, helps the watcher's eyes to fall just upon the right parts. There's a nice balance between colours and greys, the soap bubble adding much needed light to a soft shot. All in all, you were able to take a great composition, to put in the right light and to take a marvellous shot. I couldn't give to you less than a full 5 to the Technique.
About the impact, the only reason why I didn't put a 5 here, too, is the small dimensions of the shot. A bigger photo would have had more impact on the watcher - and I would have liked to study the details in a larger photo. A 4,5 here, too.
All in all, my compliments. You took a lovely composition based upon details; added a gentle touch with the circular shapes of the soap bubbles to the linear notebook and to the fading street; played very nicely with colours an light. Well-balanced and interesting.
Excuse me, please, for my errors; I'm not an English speaker.
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.